Resolved Question: Does this story sound good to you? Please answer.?

17 January 2012, 4:58 pm

This is my first book that I am writing. It's the first chapter. It was another beautiful day in Scottsdale Arizona. The wind blowing through my hair. The heat on my skin. Very peaceful in the woods. All the living creatures running around. I feel so alive here. Happiness all around me. I feel free. Dipping my hands in a stream, the water is warm and clear. Smiling in my own reflection. Standing up and turning towards the house, A beautiful buck walking by. Walking inside the house, I see my brother Adam feeding the horses. His blonde hair glowing in the sun. Walking inside the house, mother and little sister Haylee are cooking. " Bus comes in 30 minutes, better start making your way down there " Mother said. I waved her goodbye and hugged Haylee. Walking by the bus stop, my best friend Jazz is coming down the street; " I see Adam struggling with the animals" Jazz said. " He's always struggling with them animals " I replied while staring at the sky. This book is basically gonna be action. I got the medium planned and the end planned. I'm only struggling in the beginning. Is this good? I figured Scottsdale was. I'm changing it to somewhere with lands. Thanks... Read More »

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